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I feel corroded
I feel manupulated
I feel enraged
I feel used

roses

red as the pounding heart

thorns

scaring flesh and skin

mist over the river

boats to the other side
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ConvictionbyLarm Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
a wonderful poem… soft as like hard snow flakes :)
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RhynWilliams Dec 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks :)
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Kurairan Dec 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
nice... this reminds me of a part of Air Gear where Rika, the Ex-thorn queen doesn't want to let Ikki fly, they make a sort of comparison as rika being a thorn bird cage, keeping ikki, a crow, inside. in the end the crow does brake the barrier of thorns and breaks free x3
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RhynWilliams Dec 20, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks, a lovely comparison thanks
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Kurairan Dec 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
x3
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