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Rage by RhynWilliams Rage by RhynWilliams
Graphite, acrylic and tea

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:iconhfeather53:
It's intensely terrifying.
I love the tea splotches. They make the image appear dirty and/or aged.

Her hands seem out of place to me. They look more cartoonish than the rest of the piece. The way her right arm is slightly bent in looks as though she is cradling herself (and then there's a mystery hand at the bottom).

The coloring on her back where her spine is makes it look like she might morph into a demon or something. I love the way the colors run together there (it looks like part of it is from the tea bag). It's the stuff of nightmares.

Nicely done. <3
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I think is a beautiful work, full of energy.
I like the "tea" effect, maybe the white area on her right leg catch my attention too much.
I think the good point of this work is the hair, dark, and added to the back of the figure.
I don't know why you choose the abstract category to this work, maybe "macabre" "horror" even "emotional" would be more appropiated because the darkness of the colours you use, specially the "tea" giving to the work a sense of "older" "ancient".
Finally, I really like the hands and detailed fingers, this is the a great "touch" in the work giving more "tension" and amplifying the "drama".
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:iconfrodometer:
Frodometer Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done, I like this alot. The five dark spots look like finger prints like someone was reaching from behind. I personally dont see the tea as adding age to it but does add a dark sort of feel to it. The reddish color and the wide black spot on the bottom center of the backbone add to this for me as well. Almost as if the skin is ready to peel apart from her backbone and expose her physical inner self and the tea is the darkness and hatred within her escaping.
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RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks
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:iconfrodometer:
Frodometer Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem, great job
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Tuhvatulina Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool:)
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks
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rosanovella Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
Sinister.
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks!
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Katelyn-Parker Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
I like this one a lot. I can see real echoes of your earlier work. I think it's been more expressively executed than your recent work and therefore more engaging to view. I love the way you have integrated a realistic execution of the figure with the 'unfinished' feel of the right hip. Good work!!
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RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   Traditional Artist
thank you very much for your words!
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:iconhfeather53:
Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmm... That's funny. The white spot on her thigh is one of my favorite things. I guess different strokes for different folks~
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RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   Traditional Artist
it is, every single person who sees a piece of work will see and interoperate what they see in their own way, using their thoughts and memories to make sense of it
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
I don't know much about this kinda art but I still want to give you a little feedback because you asked for ;)

What I really like about the pic are the colours and the lightning! :D the light looks awesome especially on her backbone!

But I was wondering what she is doing with her hands...also the hands seem to be a little bit too small and drawn in a different style than the rest. I know - hands are hard to draw :P
Another thing that disrupts me is that the backgroud is so light...because on her body are hard and dark shadows so actually the bg should be darker. aaand maybe you could have added a few more details into that splash thingy^^

hope that was fair..
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks, i wanted her to look a little deformed, shes holding her shoes and also the light and also the light is meant to be unpleasing :P
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
well ok^^
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:iconelliedepp:
elliedepp Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
beautiful
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks!
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:iconhfeather53:
Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I cannot write a critique because I don't know enough about art ;<

It's intensely terrifying. I love the tea splotches, it makes it look dirty and aged. Her hands seem out of place to me. The coloring on her back where her spine is makes it look like she might morph into a demon or something. It's the stuff of nightmares. Nicely done. <3
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RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
see that was a critique XD it doesn't matter if its your strong point because in order to impress the greater public the greater public must say what they hate or like about the piece, **** please write what you just wrote here underneath the work!!!! LMAO :P

plus your awesome!
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:iconhfeather53:
Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
done~
and no you're awesome
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
your awesome + ∞ i win XD
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:iconhfeather53:
Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
cheater!
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
hehe ^_^
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:iconhfeather53:
Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you enjoyed the "critique" either way XD
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
i do :P
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stealthpassion Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Wow! nice work x
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thank you!
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Brilliant!!!!
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thank you!
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
My pleasure!:iconmypleasure:
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marob0501 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
strange pose , but good worked out
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thank you!
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marob0501 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YW
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KINGOOB Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Excellent work! Looks like a poster for some Japanese horror film :D
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
yes i suppose it does look a bit like that doesnt it , thanks!
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KINGOOB Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
:D
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XxMissesNumberNEINxX Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hope you realize how absolutly intense and fantanstic this is... and if you dont ITS FUCKING GREAT!!!!!!!! Exciting really... great work and you should do more of this! You're amazing at it.
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
you so very kind, and thanks for the compliment!! xx
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XxMissesNumberNEINxX Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, and you deserve it... keep up the good work!
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RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks x
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
are those fingerprints in the background? I love it
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
yes it is :D and thanks
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that's fantastic, I love the contrast it creates
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks!
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EyeGoCrazy Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome peice, I love the dirty feel to this. fitting since rage is often a messy affair. :D
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thankyou so much !!
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EyeGoCrazy Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
my pleasure :)
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snow-angels Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student Writer
Absolutely fantastic.
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:iconrhynwilliams:
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks x
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nakedartbylupe Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Great stuff!! Love the way you combine the erotic pose and yet add the 'dark' stains to make it moody, erotically eerie and sexy. Well done!!
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RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
thank you so very much
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